Final digpak

Final Magazine Poster

Final Video

Questionnaire

Peer and teacher feedback-Magazine cover

After our second screening feedback, we had an inital screening of our poster. Simliar to our music video and digipak screenings, our teachers and peers were asked to evaulate the poistives and the negatives with our magazine cover/poster.


Positives 
Nice image used for the cover/advert
Good use of effect in photoshop
The image relates to the video
Picture fits with the music video
Panited effect


Negatives
Can't see the writing
Over edited slightly
Needs information adding
Struggle to see the text
Poster pixels don't work
Colour of text needs to be changed
Doesn't say which magazine it is from

Peer and teacher feedback-Digipak

After our second screening feedback, we had an inital screening of our digipak. Simliar to our music video screening, our treachers and peers were asked to evaulate the poistives and the negatives with our digipak.


Positives
Good selection of images
Detailed writing on the digipak
Good choice on font for text
Shots work well with genre 
Good techical use of the camera to create effects (night images)

Negatives 
 Didn't use a fixie bike in the video
Alot of text on one photo
One of the photos is stretched
Not all of the images fit together as a whole
All font text needs to be the same throughout
The night time  shots don't relate to the music video

Peer feedback-Second screening

During and after our second screening our teachers and peers were invited to make comments on our music video. The assessment had three main focus points: What genre of music they thought it was, positives(strengths) and negatives(weaknesses).

These were the main genres of music that peers and our teachers thought our music was or belonged to:
Indie
Pop
Soul
R n B

The main poistives from our second screening were:
The shots added from the intial screening work well.
I love the way it starts the fade in focus works well.
Good length of shots
Narrative shots are more clear than the intial screening
Good balance of performance vs narrative

Good framing on some shots
Lighting considered on all shots
Graffti shot works well



The main negatives from our second screening were:
Some parts are not synced properly
Some shots are slightly repetitive
A bin appears in some shots
Narrative isn't always clear
Needed more narrative
Genre isn't always clear
More of the graffti shot in the video
Cut the shots either performance/narrative to the pace of the song