Feedback from Inital screening

The feedback that we recieved from peers and teachers added to the self-assessment feedback the group gave itself after we had our intial version.

 Feedback 

Positives 

Locations during the music are considered.
Costume is considered and kept simliar through out.
A good range of shots.
Well synced with original song.
Use of camera focus works well on intial shot.

Negatives 

Narrative isn't clear.
Audience couldn't understand what we were trying to convey in our video.
Aspects of framing not considered (bin) and (dog walker).
Pace of the song doesn't match with editing.
The pace of cuts could build as the song begins to build.
Use of camera focus not constant.

Plan of action 

Use all feedback including self-assessment to our advantage.
Plan a simple narrative that will be effective and conventional.
Re-film performance shots from a range of angles.
Refilm urban narrative shots using tripod instead of handheld.
Consider all aspects of framing at all times.
Upload our initial video to our facebook page and youtube to gain feedback and communicate with our target audience and peers.
Use the pace of our song to mimic our pace of cuts within our music video.
Use camera focus within the music video constantly or not at all.