Peer feedback-Second screening

During and after our second screening our teachers and peers were invited to make comments on our music video. The assessment had three main focus points: What genre of music they thought it was, positives(strengths) and negatives(weaknesses).

These were the main genres of music that peers and our teachers thought our music was or belonged to:
Indie
Pop
Soul
R n B

The main poistives from our second screening were:
The shots added from the intial screening work well.
I love the way it starts the fade in focus works well.
Good length of shots
Narrative shots are more clear than the intial screening
Good balance of performance vs narrative

Good framing on some shots
Lighting considered on all shots
Graffti shot works well



The main negatives from our second screening were:
Some parts are not synced properly
Some shots are slightly repetitive
A bin appears in some shots
Narrative isn't always clear
Needed more narrative
Genre isn't always clear
More of the graffti shot in the video
Cut the shots either performance/narrative to the pace of the song